This is an excerpt from a WIP I'm working on, telling the story of a couple who, in a last bid to avoid the divorce courts, decide to try domestic discipline to iron out their problems.
“Go have your bath,” he instructed coolly, “And leave the
door unlocked for me.”
Maria felt the butterflies flitting in her tummy, he had a
right to be angry, and she had timed her confession deliberately, hoping the
glass of wine would calm him, it was after all her fourth speeding ticket this
year. As she tried to relax in the sensual fragrant bubbles, she could hear his
footsteps on the stairs and her nerves hit fever pitch.
“Up on all fours,” he instructed, entering the bathroom
waving a butt plug and belt. She scurried to obey, now was not the time to
argue with him, her warm wet skin felt the cool air of the bathroom and she
shivered.
Maria whimpered softly as he mercilessly plunged the plug
into her most secret place and as soon as it was in place she heard the tell-tale
swish of the leather through the air, before she even had time to catch her
breath.
GREAT excerpt! I literally can't wait to read more!!!
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Yup, speeding is dangerous but he's strict! A butt plug and a leather belt? Yikes! Interesting premise, though. Would be interested in knowing how they got into this relationship. Sounds like it isn't anything new to her. Definitely want to know more. Thanks for sharing, Tara.
ReplyDeleteThat made my bits quiver…yum…
ReplyDeleteSorry for the TMI. :)
Oh, wow. That was pretty freaking hot.
ReplyDeleteA belt and a plug for a ticket? The tease did say it was the fourth...yikes! Poor girl. I want to know more. :D
ReplyDeleteAlternative to Divorce - Discipline style... love this concept and can you really go wrong with a belt and butt-plug for the readers sensual interests and quandary... looking forward to more of this now... ✦
ReplyDeletegreat excerpt, Tara!
ReplyDeleteI agree, this was HOT!
And I love the premise of DD as an alternative to divorce. Very realistic.
The butt plug has really aroused my interest. I need to do some online searching I guess.
:)
OH, all those tickets. She's in for it now;)
ReplyDeleteFourth speeding ticket? Ouch! Bet she won’t be in such a hurry now! Great excerpt Tara :)
ReplyDeleteA plug and a whipping with a belt on wet skin? Would hate to see what happens if her license had been revoked!
ReplyDeletewhew, wet whippings are wicked! (how was that for an alliteration? :)
ReplyDeletegreat teaser!
Yikes! Plugged and strapped, and he doesn't even wait for her to get out of the bath first. It's that last line that gets me, too. Oh, poor girl! Wonderful snippet!
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