A little taster...
You work in the service industry and you don't quite measure up, one of your customers, also a potential investor takes exception and treats you like a very naughty young lady.
How would you react? This is the situation this young lady found herself in. This is the first proper meeting since he took her to task.
“Not late am I?” she asked tauntingly, sensing his
impatience but knowing that try as he might he couldn’t fault her timekeeping.
“No, just on time,” he smiled through gritted teeth. Maeve
was emboldened by the tension in his tone.
“So, Mr Williamson, what
did you want to discuss?” she cut to the chase.
“Don’t you think it’s time you called me Larry, if we’re
going to be in business together?” he asked.
I do hope you enjoyed my little snippet, and enjoyed checking out all of the others on the blog hop.
oooh, she got a spanking and she is taunting him? Try as she might to convince herself otherwise, she is itching for another one.
ReplyDeleteI have a feeling this is the next day, or another appointment, and for this one she made sure she was on time. Even still, I love the taunting. Look forward to reading more, Tara.
ReplyDeleteWith that bratty attitude, methinks she's pursuing another thrashing on her bare tush. Nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteOh, she's a bigger brat than I am. Makes my palm twitchy with her brass attitude.
ReplyDeleteShe is definitely wanting more of what she has found to be wanton and sensual... and that brat in her tone and demure just might get her what she is looking for... wonderful set-up and quandary here...
ReplyDeleteI have to reply to you all en masse as it seems there is no mercy for poor Maeve. What about this brutish man who forced his discipline on her? I hope she shows a lot more fight before anyone is declared victor! :-)
ReplyDeleteoo I love the taunting :) yes, spunk is very good, especially in the "face" of a spanking
ReplyDeleteI totally agree Joelle, spunk is good, much more fun ;)
DeleteHey Tara, I love reading your stuff. I feel like I'm talking to you the whole time. I'm almost done with My Naughty Little Secret and the characters are so unique, especially Siobhan for a female lead in this genre. I'm loving it and feeling like I'm really hearing you.
ReplyDeleteWow Natasha, from a writer as polished you that really is a compliment. So glad your enjoying MNLS.
DeleteLOL. I love the part about refusing to call him by his first name. Sometimes a girl has to use the only defense she has. :)
ReplyDeleteIndeed she does, Ana, nothing like putting him in his box!
DeleteOooh. She’s so going to get what she’s looking for. I hope we get to see it soon! Great snippet Tara :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe, maybe not, Constance! It might take a while before she realises what she needs.
DeleteExcellent tension in the scene. Nice writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cara, yes it's a very tense meeting.
DeleteOh...she's gonna get it. And like it!
ReplyDeleteIn time perhaps Celeste, we don't always know what's good for us!
DeleteBeing tardy is never a good idea, and although it would suggest that she's trying to get on his good side, his gritted teeth and her snotty attitude make for some fireworks. Well done!
ReplyDeleteOh there'll be fireworks, you can be sure, Patricia. I just hope that they're those pretty ones that are a joy to watch and nobody gets badly burned!
ReplyDeleteWhoa-- she's already been spanked and now she's trying to recover face. Great snippet!~!!
ReplyDeleteQuite right Renee, she needs to recover face as one set of blushing cheeks is quite enough for any young lady. ;)
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