A humiliation even worse than spanking.....
A follow on to my as yet untitled WIP, last week I introduced you to a young lady, Maeve, who was trying to readjust the balance of power after she had been unexpectedly spanked by a customer/potential investor. They have moved on a bit from there, and Maeve unfortunately seems to misread the signals and makes a move on the same gentleman. He spilled something on his shirt and as he took it off, she rubbed his deliciously muscular chest.It starts off ok, he responds well enough but....(read on)
He cupped her rounded bottom with his hands, pulling her
hips into him until he realised he was virtually stabbing her with his
erection, and released the pressure a little. All the while, she continued
rubbing his chest, shoulders and back. It felt so good, especially when she
moved her hands towards his lower tummy. Damn, he wanted her so badly.
Panic hit him: he had to stop this before it went any
further. He pulled away and grabbed a
fresh shirt. He saw her eyes search his face, hurt and humiliated. Before he
had a chance to speak she left the room.
Thank you for dropping by. Please do drop in on all the blogs as some delicious treats are sure to await you.
Oops! I'm sure he'll pursue her, but he'll have some 'splainin' to do. For those of you who may not understand that expression (since it dates me), in the American TV series "I Love Lucy," whenever the Cuban band leader Ricky Ricardo came home after his wife Lucy had gotten into trouble, he'd call "Lucy, you have some 'splainin' to do." That was always Lucy's cue to do some fast thinking, since Ricky occasionally spanked.
ReplyDeleteI remember watching I Love Lucy as a child, but I never remember Ricky spanking Lucy, I don't know if it was our wonderful censors at work, (they were very strict in 70's Ireland) or if it was just something I hadn't yet developed a fetish for and didn't pass any remarks!
Deleteuh oh. Communication misfire! Setting up a good conflict!
ReplyDeleteAnd worse to come Renee! Thank you.
DeleteNice way to draw us in, Tara. Looking forward to what comes next.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ana, I might reveal more next week.
DeleteOh no, what happened? Don't leave us like this. I like these bits very much.
ReplyDeleteAll will be revealed...in time. Thanks Natasha.
DeleteAww. I feel sorry for her. He better do some fast talking. I understood what you meant Kathryn..dates me too :)
ReplyDeleteI agree Constance! I come from a generation where women simply didn't make the advances. It would take a lot of courage and then to be knocked back would be so terrible.
DeleteI love Lucy! ;-) Oh, how rude - I should wait to comment on the crazy comments until after I mention the post.
ReplyDeleteGreat 8, Tara. I love this mini-excerpt - it's full of... everything!
HaHa, you made me laugh Irishey, I just had to jump in on the I love Lucy comment too!
DeleteThanks for the comment. ;-)
Love the combined emotion and hinted sensuality in that pesky erection and oh those searching eyes with the hurt and humiliation... such depth in these eight sentences...
ReplyDeleteThank you Joseph. When the body and brain aren't in unison it can cause such confusion.
ReplyDeleteOh, boy. Rejection. She is gonna firm up those walls. And by the way, loved the line "he realised he was virtually stabbing her with his erection".
ReplyDeleteThanks Thianna, it was to be a little snigger before the poor reader has to handle her rejection. And yes, rejection sure does raise those boundaries.
DeleteYep, this is obviously going some place fun. As for I Love Lucy - I remember each and every spanking she had, as a kid I got such a forbidden thrill from them. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
ReplyDeleteThanks PK. I hope it is fun.
ReplyDeleteAs for I love Lucy, hmm, they must have been censored...
ah soooo sad :( I hope they work things out :) and we get at least a HFN. Loved the lines
ReplyDeleteA HFN? I love it! Thanks Joelle.
DeleteIt would be confusing to be "stabbed" with an erection and then rebuffed. LOL.
ReplyDeleteNeedless to say...it's complicated. Thank you Cara
DeleteNice snippet, Tara. LOL, he does have some 'splaining' to do!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary, he sure does!
DeletePoor Maeve! How horrifying. He'd better make it up to her.
ReplyDeleteIt would be a real nightmare. The humiliation...doesn't bear thinking about, Angie.
DeleteThe word "ouch" comes to mind. I can see he's stabbed her with something other than flesh. Well done.
ReplyDeleteUh oh! I'm sure it'll be explosive again when they work it out:) Great snippet, Tara!
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